The Bad Beggining

           Violet:Violet is the eldist orphan to her brother Klause and her sister Sunny.She is extremley smart,and shes an inventor.Every time she wants to work on a new invention she ties her hair up in a bow.(She thinks its dumb to be distracted by something as small as her hair).If I was ever UNLUCKY enough to be in that story I would be Violets best friend.While she was stuck doing dispicuble chores a child should never have to do,I would visit and help her finish Olafs terrible requsts.Then as soon as we were finshed I would try to figure out a way to get them out of that disgusting place.I would be very pursuasive.My memorible charictor trait would be when Im thinking  I would  always bounce and catch a big bouncy ball.So now you know Violets my favorite charictor.

on  November 16, 2009  at  9:45 AM

Heyy,I like how when you put in (perrenthathes) that she thinks its dumb to get distracted by her hair.I also like how you put why you would be her friend.You are very vocabalry in you paragraph.Thats really good.I think that those chores are very ridloues for kids like her age to do those kinda chores,but very well done.bye

on  November 16, 2009  at  9:49 AM

When you commented on my page you said that was not a law but in the book it said it was.and yes they should go with there family member.

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