The Bad Beginning: Klaus's point of view

Yesterday I had to prepare dinner for Count Olaf and he got mad at us for not making beef stew. So he lifted my sister Sunny up in the air.So I got real mad at him so I started saying some stuff to him then he struck me across the face. Today I figured out his plan. Haha olaf can't fool me so he's trying to marry my sister Violet.

on  November 16, 2009  at  9:30 AM

Why did you do Klaus?

on  November 16, 2009  at  1:24 PM

the Olaf was not capitalized. The I in "So I got real mad at him..." Was not capitalized ether, but the rest was great. 

on  November 16, 2009  at  1:27 PM

You need to work on punuaction

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